I always have thought of what I was going to do when I grow up, I thought being a doctor, a singer, a movie star, creating my own business etc. After reading the memoir of the created of shoe TOMS I started thinking differently about what I was going to do when I grow up. From the moment I started reading the first chapter I have a totally different way of thinking about my future and what I was going to be and do when I grow up. I really don’t know what to do but I know I want to do some thing that can change people life and people way of living a way of thinking.
too short to be a memoir in my opinnion, also i leke how you tell that you change views in what you want it to do in your future
ResponderEliminarAntonella I think you should expend in the memoir because it is very short but the idea is excellent. Try doing something as doing a flash forward in which you picture yourself doing something that will change peoples way of life. Also because you talked of the book you should do a link which takes you to a website that gives you the prologue. In addition if you are going to do this you should not get a website as Wikipedia but a place that has good reading reviews as Good Reads. I also think you should describe one of the things the character in the memoir you read did that was to symbolic to you. To expand you could say what you thought of doing as a doctor or as any of the jobs you listed. You have a good idea but what you wrote was very bleak.
ResponderEliminarAntonella I just noticed that you don't have the moderate comment because I just posted a comment and it automatically posted. You should fix this because you may get in trouble with Mrs. Meadows and anyone can post inappropriate comments and you will not even notice.
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